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  Feedback: Good eerie feel sound effects/music is good when Harry is grabbed possibly a bit more music in the background? sound bleed for the song is cool but could be smoother (transition effect?) title card looks cool glitches are well placed Starting with silence is a missed opportunity I feel, unless that silence is really deliberate. Your opening could have a foreboding / sinister note held that bleeds over from the logo to really set atmosphere / tone. You only have 2 mins! Make every sec count. I wonder if your film doesn’t feel like it needs some more establishing shots. Doesn’t have to be conventional wide/ long shots but more just random shots that help set the scene and place the audience in the picture of where the scene is set. You can have opening credits come up in after effect style that suits the look / feel, over these shots? Look at trying out some other suspense-filled, more creepy sound tracks. Just try a few options and make sure you have the best v...